Narrative writing

What can be seen?

A beautiful ocean, with lots of sand,flags,pretty waves,nice shiny sun,beautiful blue sky,a smart pig surfing

What can be heard?

Waves what are crashing on the shaw,wind whistling in your ears.

What can be smelt?

I can smell the ocean,sand,and,coconut trees.

What can be felt?

The waves,surfboard,and the wind.

Who are the characters in your story?

Jack Alex.

Where is your story set?

Island.

What problem is going to happen in your story?

The pig fell off the surfboard.

How are you going to solve the problem?

The pig is going to climb, back onto the surfboard.

You are going to write below.

Think about how you can:

• Add detail to your ideas using interesting vocabulary.
• Use directional language (in front of, behind, to the left of…) to make connections between your ideas.

Write here:Once upon a time there was a famly and there names were Alex,and Jack.The man was Alex and the pig was Jack.One day Alex and Jack went surfing that a beach but it was Call  sandy beach because it had los of sand,and it had some trees but they were coconut trees.When they got there they had to run to the beach because they had park really far but they got there so they went to go and surf.Soon they pot the pig on the surfboard and Alex pot a GoPro4 on Jack.Then they went surfing plus Alex had a Gopro3 on the front of the surfboard.Soon Jack fell off the surfboard so Jack swam to the surfboard but Jack could not get on the surfboard so Alex help him up to get on the surfboard but they still wanted to surf.But soon Alex,and,Jack saw a big wave coming towards Alex and Jack and when the big wave come towards Alex and jack when it was Hi Jack and Alex Jack started to slide down the surfboard and then a Another big wave came Racing towards them really fast and Jack fell off the urfboard again and then Alex had to help Jack up tickets go on to the board and they still wanted to surf then another way came but it was not a smell wave it was a really big wave and pig fell off again and again and Alex had to help Jack up back onto the surfboard and Alex and Jack went back to the ireland to go and have a break from surfing because they were tired but luckily they pack some lunch so they had some food.Then they went back to surfing and Alex said to Jack said to Jack we are going to go home soon because it was getting cold so they quick surf before they went home. But Alex said to Jack we had so much fun but then they was one more big wave but they didn’t surf the wave because it was getting to cold for them so they went back home and when they got they they had a drink,then Jack,and,Alex went to go and watch some TV but then Alex went to go and play some roblox,and,Jack went to go and,watch Alex play roblox,when it was 10 mins later Alex,and,Jack went to go to bed.The next day Jack,Alex went back to go and surf back at sandy beach and they had so mach fun but they left the surfboard at home so they sat on the sand and watched the other people surf.Soon Alex,and,Jack saw a big wave coming towards them so they jumped into the water because it was so hot at sandy beach then Alex,and,Jack went back home because it was goting so Boring watching other people surf because they're wanted to surf to but then one man come to them and said do you want a turn on my surfboard so Alex,and,said yes please and they said thx you are the man so Alex and Jack set off and went to go and surf some wave and some of them were so big that the wave come over Alex,and,Jack but luckily the big wave do not hit Alex because Alex was at the back of the surfboard but it hit the tip of the surfboard.When the wave hit the water Alex and Jack went so fast That's day went all the way to shore and Jack went fly fast and hi was going towards the sun and Jack landed on his nose but when Jack went to go back to the surfboard some of the people were laughing at jack because hi had some sand on his nose and hi do not want to watch the sound of his nose so hi was just going to surf but then they were going to go and give the surfboard back to the mam who gave them the board so they could show and then Alex and Jack went back home to go and rest.Soon Alex and Jack went to bed and that was the end of Alex and Jack going surfing at sandy beach the end.